Hello,
I’m Tomás
Risi, I am 21 years old and I was born on Santiago the 3rd of July
of 1992. I live with my parents and my little brother, he call Martin and only
was 6 years old, we have a big age difference, a lot of times the people thinks
he is my son.
I’m studying in the best Law School of the
country, which is the Law School of the Universidad de Chile. For the free
curse I take English, because I really want to improve my English and have the confidence
to talk with a lot of people.
I have a
lot of hobbies or thinks I like to do, I really like hang out with my friends,
and also like play with my little brother. I love it practicing sports, like tennis,
soccer or football ( I don’t understand the difference, If you know it, I hope you can tell me) or only running or bike look for some peace in
this big city.
Bye , and
like Bon Jovi says Have a nice day…
You can see the difference here. Sort of.
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Hi Tomas, these are my comments about your writing.
ResponderEliminarI’m Tomás Risi, I am 21 years old and I was born on Santiago the 3rd of July of 1992. I live with my parents and my little brother, he is called Martin and only is 6 years old, we have a big age difference, a lot of times the people thinks he is my son.
I’m studying in the best Law School of the country, which is the Law School of the Universidad de Chile. For the free course I take English, because I really want to improve my English and have the confidence to talk with a lot of people.
I have a lot of hobbies or things I like to do, I really like hanging out with my friends, and also like playing with my little brother. I love practicing sports, like tennis, soccer or football ( I don’t understand the difference, If you know it, I hope you can tell me) or only running or riding a bike, looking for some peace in this big city.
Bye , and like Bon Jovi says Have a nice day…
thank you :)
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